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by fluteofreed @ 2008-05-10 - 07:03:23

I love.
The amalgam of pain
And joy crushes me
And then revives me
With sudden jump
In space.
I breathe.
My feelings breathe.
Sometimes I hate,
But my love comes
In waves and
Floods the ocean.
Scream.
I fall,
I stand ...
Never in peace ...


 
 

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some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 08:06

Nice, I like it and I'm not even sure why - that's got to be a good thing :)

And thanks for the youtube post - I had never heard of Helloween before, but that guy has a great voice, kind of like the current singer in Dream Theater, I thought.

fluteofreedfluteofreed [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 08:22

:)

Helloween are great band. I like Dream Theater too. :)

Are you really from Korea?

One of my last favorite movies is "The Story of the First King's Four Gods" .... I love it!!!

some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 08:29

Afraid I'm merely a temporary resident of Korea - I'm teaching English as a foreign language in one of the many schools. Born and raised in good old England :)
Not seen that film, but will definitely keep a note of the title - the vengeance trilogy are about the only Korean films I've seen, very good, if a little disturbing.

some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 08:32

Well, I assumed it was a film, is it a series?

fluteofreedfluteofreed [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 08:54

Yes, it is a series. I downloaded it from internet and I have been watching it day after day around Christmas as it is 24 series. :)

By the way I am from Bulgaria. :)

some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 09:11

I might try looking around for it, but to be honest I'm not much of one for TV - other than films.

And you do really well writing poetry in English when you're from Bulgaria. Good work on that one :)

fluteofreedfluteofreed [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 09:27

Thanks. :)
I actually write poetry in my own language and then translate it into English only slightly changing some words so that it sounds better. And of course, I thank God for the dictionaries! :)

The funny thing is that often it sounds well in English even not touching it ... I wonder if it is only because your language is so melodious or just because I use simple and strong words ... or something :)

some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 10:28

Hm, that makes more sense, and I suppose with poetry there's less of an issue with things like sentence structure than there would be with prose. And I must admit that I've never thought of the English language as melodious - I can see it in French, and Italian and a host of others, but not English; must be a foreign language thing :)

fluteofreedfluteofreed [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 11:10

Of course, the grammar it is less of an issue and that's one of reasons I dare to translate my simple poetry :)

It is melodious, believe me! Our language sound much harder and it is difficult to sing it. In English even "Good morning" may sound as a song :)

some1elsesome1else [Member]
2008-05-10 @ 13:39

Well, not you've said that, I can sort of see what you mean about being able to sing things - I quite like that :)

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